Forever Lost


This story started as a free write given by Kellie Elmore on her website around 2010.

For those who do not know what a free write is, it is when you are given a prompt and you write to that prompt. For example, an image either photo or drawing can work. A word bank, which can be made up of around five or six random words that you put together in a story or poem. Or it can be a phrase, poem, short story. There are probably hundreds of types of prompts out there, I have only listed a few. The one rule is you write until to you stop and that is what you post on her website. (I will admit to going back and fixing typos, maybe a comma or two, but what is there is what comes to mind as I write.) Kellie has given many prompts that have interested my muse and sparked pieces of stories, a couple that have grown into more than just the free write it was suppose to be, which I put on my old website An Author and her Muse. Once I started to write here I decided to take it down because I could not keep up with two websites. It’s been pushing at me to repost it for sometime and I finally gave in.

Forever Lost sort of wrote itself. Under the original title Angels & Demons, as an experiment I put the rough draft on my website and wrote at least a chapter a week. I have never written something this quickly. I also showed my writing process which shows just because it is written in chapter two, it does not mean it is necessarily written in stone. I learn my characters as I write, just like you learn about them as you read. They grow as I write and even surprise me with some of their decisions. Decisions that make something that happened earlier in the book not work. So in come the edits.

This version is the last edit of book one. Hopefully the final edit, but knowing me…. 😀 Some things have changed since that first rough draft, some have not. Since I have not read this story in sometime, we will see what happens. I’m hoping not much because I hate throwing out pages. I will try to post a chapter a week.

Here is the prompt that was given to us on the day Forever Lost was born.

You’re young. You are standing in front of a shop window watching something on the black and white television inside. A woman grabs your hand and runs down the street, pulling you along…

I’d be interested to see what your story your muse weaves. Now, enough talk and on to Forever Lost.

Image: Desktop Nexus Wallpapers – angels&demons

Chapter 1                            Chapter 13                     Chapter 25
Chapter 2                            Chapter 14                     Chapter 26
Chapter 3                            Chapter 15                     Chapter 27
Chapter 4                            Chapter 16                     Chapter 28
Chapter 5                            Chapter 17                     Chapter 29
Chapter 6                            Chapter 18                     Chapter 30
Chapter 7                            Chapter 19                     Chapter 31
Chapter 8                            Chapter 20                     Chapter 32
Chapter 9                            Chapter 21                     Chapter 33
Chapter 10                          Chapter 22                     Chapter 34
Chapter 11                          Chapter 23                     Chapter 35
Chapter 12                          Chapter 24                     Epilogue

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