Broken Promises

Broken Promises is based on the very first story I ever wrote. The one that was was started with a writing prompt from my 8th grade home room teacher. The original was all fan-fiction. Mixing and mashing TV shows and at least one movie together to make an original story. It was easier for me to use the characters and places of those shows because I had them firmly in my head. The story line was all my own though. I have that first part because my mom typed it up for me and I turned it in to my teacher in place of another project we were suppose to do. You see, I was too busy writing to do the project. lol. Luckily my teacher was more than happy to support my fledgling writing. She also wanted to know how it ended.

750+ handwritten pages later (yes you read that right) and it still wasn’t done. I won’t be using that first part (15 year old teenage writing is a bit…scary). What I will post sort of jumps in the middle of that story. Don’t worry, it should make sense. I will have to heavily edit a few chapters. This is not a PG-13 story, so I will tone down some of the more…sexually intense scenes. Try to make it more R rated. Kara’s life is not an easy one.

I will see how it goes, how you respond. I would like friendly feedback whether it is positive or negative. It will help me figure out what works and what doesn’t. Like Forever Lost, I will have a page for it under random writing with links to each chapter and links to the chapters on either side at the bottom of the posted page. Part of me sort of thinks this may be a continuation of Forever Lost, even though the character’s names are different as are the places and genre. Let me know what you think.

Chapter   1           Chapter 11           Chapter 21
Chapter   2           Chapter 12           Chapter 22
Chapter   3           Chapter 13           Chapter 23
Chapter   4           Chapter 14           Chapter 24
Chapter   5           Chapter 15           Chapter 25
Chapter   6           Chapter 16           Chapter 26
Chapter   7           Chapter 17           Chapter 27
Chapter   8           Chapter 18           Chapter 28
Chapter   9           Chapter 19           Chapter 29
Chapter 10           Chapter 20           Chapter 30

Chapter 31 Chapter 41
Chapter 32 Chapter 42
Chapter 33 Chapter 43
Chapter 34 Chapter 44
Chapter 35 Chapter 45
Chapter 36
Chapter 37
Chapter 38
Chapter 39
Chapter 40

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