So many things I want to say.
Words tumbling around, every which way.
Each one wanting to be first
Each one for better or worst.
Sifting through the jumbled mess
Just too many to express.
I promise I will find
With deep thought and time
Someday, someway
To convey
Those words that means so much
So you will know
With my heart, I give you my trust.
© 2015 Heidi Barnes
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Wow … just posted the new prompt … this would be perfect for the new one too … thank you for sharing your talent … particularly love the first few lines:
So many things I want to say.
Words tumbling around, every which way.
Each one wanting to be first
Each one for better or worst.
Thank you. 🙂 Will go take a look.
Wonderful Heidi … hard as I try, I can’t seem to write with few words … I have to ramble on and on … see? I’m doing it even now! Hahaha .. great poem!
Nothing wrong with rambling. When I ramble it clears my mind when it’s blocked up.
That would be a good thing, I’m a perpetual rambler! ;)))
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Magnificent!